Semicolons

What is a Semicolon (;)?

A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses that are closely related in meaning. It can also be used to separate items in a list when the items contain commas.

Examples:

  1. I wanted to stay up late; however, I was too tired.
  2. We visited Paris, France; Rome, Italy; and Madrid, Spain.

 

Why should I care?

Semicolons help your writing flow and add sophistication to your work. More importantly, you get marks for using them! Marks are available for using a wide range of punctuation accurately, including semi-colons.

Part 1: Combine the Sentences Using a Semicolon

Rewrite the following sentence pairs as one sentence using a semicolon.

  1. The sun was setting; the sky turned a brilliant shade of orange.
  2. I have a big test tomorrow; I can’t go out tonight.
  3. My dog loves to run outside; he hates getting his paws wet.
  4. We went to the park; it started to rain.
  5. I enjoy reading books; my sister prefers watching movies.

Part 2: Add Semicolons

Add the missing semicolons into the following sentences.

  1. Dan was in a filthy mood; it was Monday morning and the coffee machine was out of order.
  2. The video game was ludicrously expensive; nevertheless, I bought it anyway.
  3. I made some bad decisions yesterday; I shouldn’t have had that seventh cream egg.
  4. Zara came into school on crutches; an owl had knocked her off her skateboard again.
  5. We haven’t won the league since 1927; despite this, I still buy a season ticket every year.
  6. Katie’s dad got up on stage and sang karaoke; she was absolutely mortified.
  7. South Sudan is the newest country in the world; it gained independence in 2011.
  8. Dylan didn’t get past the first audition; they said he had a voice like a wounded moose.
  9. On my trip to Europe, I visited Vienna, Austria; Prague, Czech; Republic Berlin, Germany; and Copenhagen, Denmark.
  10. You’ll need to pack warm clothes, drinks, and snacks for the hike; books, headphones, and games for the flight; and pyjamas, toiletries, and chargers for the hotel.

Part 3: Create Your Own Sentences

Write three original sentences using semicolons correctly.

  1. My dog was eating bones; he didn’t know it has a sharp end.
  2. The  burger flipped; ketchup splattered on me
  3. I played softball with my brother; he doesn’t know how to bat

Compulsory Challenge: Find a sentence in a book or article that correctly uses a semicolon. Write it down and explain why the semicolon is used.

I drove to a restaurant to meet my friends; they weren’t there. I was quite upset, questioning myself, ‘Why would they do this? It’s my birthday.’ As I started leaving, my friends popped out from the left and right, yelling, ‘Happy Birthday!

It’s used to make stories more knowledgeable and not complicated. It should also join two exact sentences that are related. Like close and the same. Not exactly sometimes.

Ruthless: Response To Text

Instructions:

  • Read through this text. 
  • Using the highlighter tool, remove any information that is NOT important in identifying the author’s message by highlighting it in black.
  • Make sure you look at all the information.
  • Answer the questions below the text

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Ruthless – By William DeMille 1945

Outside, the woods lay basking in clear October sunlight; trees a riot of color, air full of Autumn’s tang  and the sharp, exciting smell of moist, leaf- covered earth. Inside, a man smiled grimly as he turned from the  bathroom cabinet, entered the expensively primitive  living room of his mountain camp, and crossed to a  closet set in the pine wall. It was his special closet, with a spring lock and in it he kept guns, ammunition, fishing-rods, tackle2 and liquor. Not even his wife was allowed to have a key, for Judson Webb loved his personal possessions and felt a sense of deep outrage if they were touched by any hand but his own. The closet door stood open; he had been packing his things away for the Winter, and in a few minutes would be driving back to civilization.

As he looked at the shelf on which the liquor stood his smile was not attractive. All the bottles were unopened except one quart of Bourbon which was placed invitingly in front, a whiskey glass by its side. This bottle was less than half full. As he took it from the shelf his wife spoke from the adjoining bedroom:

“I’m all packed, Judson,” she said. “Hasn’t Alec come to turn the water off and get the keys?”
Alec lived about a mile down the road and acted as a caretaker for the city folks when they were away.

“He’s down at the lake taking the boats out of water. Said he’d be back in half an hour.”
But she paused in surprise as she saw the bottle in her husband’s hand.
“Judson!” she exclaimed, “you’re not taking a drink at ten o’clock in the morning?”

“You wrong me, my dear,” he chuckled, “I’m not taking anything out of this bottle: I am merely putting a little kick into it.

His closed hand opened and he put upon the table two tiny white pellets3 as he started to uncork the whiskey. Her eyes narrowed as she watched him. She had learned to dread that tone of his voice; it was the tone he used when he was planning to “put something over”4 in a business deal.

“Whoever broke into my closet last Winter and stole my liquor will probably try it again once we are out of here,” he went on, “only this time he’ll wish he hadn’t.”

She caught her breath at the cruel vindictiveness of his manner as one by one he dropped the tablets into the bottle and held it up to watch them dissolve.

“What are they?” she asked, “something to make him sick?”

“And how!” He seemed fascinated as he saw the genial Bourbon change into a lethal dose: “At least no one has found an antidote:5 once it’s down its curtains.”6 He corked his bottled vengeance and set it back on the shelf alongside the little whiskey glass.

 “Everything nice and handy,” he remarked approvingly. “Now, Mr. Thief, when you break in, drink hearty; I won’t begrudge  you this one.”

The woman’s face was pale. “Don’t do it, Judson,” she gasped. “It’s horrible — it’s murder.”

“The law doesn’t call it murder if I shoot a thief who is entering my house by force,” he said harshly. “Also, the use of rat poison is quite legal. The only way any rat can get into this closet is to break in. What happens then is his affair, not mine.”

“Don’t do it, Judson,” she begged. “The law doesn’t punish burglary by death; so what right have you -”

“When it comes to protecting my property I make my own laws.” His deep voice suggested a big dog growling at threatened loss of a bone.

“But all they did was to steal a little liquor,” she pleaded. “Probably some boys off on a lark.8 They didn’t do any real damage.”

“That’s not the point,” he said. “If a man holds me up and robs me of five dollars it makes me just as sore as if he took a hundred. A thief’s a thief.”

She made one last effort. “We won’t be here till next spring. I can’t bear to think of that deathtrap waiting there all the time. Suppose something happens to us — and no one knows — ”

He chuckled once more at her words. “We’ll take a chance on that,” he said. “I’ve made my pile9 by taking chances. If I should die, you can do as you please. The stuff will be yours.”

It was useless to argue, she knew. He had always been ruthless in business and whenever anything crossed him. Things had to be done his way. She turned toward the outer door with a sigh of defeat. “I’ll walk down the road and say goodbye at the farmhouse,” she said quietly. “You can pick me up there.” She had made up her mind to tell Alec’s wife. Someone had to know.

“Okay, my dear,” he smiled genially, “and don’t worry about your poor, abused little burglar. No one is going to get hurt who hasn’t got it coming to him.”

As she went down the path he started to close the closet door; then paused as he remembered his hunting boots drying outside on the porch. They belonged in the closet, so leaving the door open he went to fetch them from the heavy, rustic table on which they stood, along with his bag and top coat.

Alec was coming up from the lake and waved to him from a distance. A chipmunk, hearing Judson’s heavy tread, abandoned the acorn he was about to add to his store within the cabin wall and disappeared, like an electric bulb burning out. Judson, reaching for his boots, stepped fairly upon the acorn, his foot slid from under him and his head struck the massive table as he fell.

Several minutes later he began to regain his senses. Alec’s strong arm was supporting his head as he lay on the porch and a kindly voice was saying: “’Twarn’t  much of a fall, Mr. Webb. You aren’t cut none; jest knocked out for a minute. Here, take this; it’ll pull you together.”

A small whiskey glass was pressed to his lips. Dazed and half-conscious, he drank.

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Question 1 – What is the text mainly about? Make sure you answer using full sentences.

 

The text is mainly about this man that loves alcohol and wont quit at all. His obsession soon goes dangerous. And it backfires. 

 

Question 2 – How does this text make you feel or react? 

 

The text makes me feel a bit uncomfortable but more and mostly disgusted. Because the man has a great obsession with his belongings, mostly about alcohol. He loves it way more than his own family and love.

 

Question 3 – Using the information above,  what do you think is the author’s MAIN message and why do you think this? 

 

Or is some sort of way: Being greedy and cruel will come back at you.

Why? Because Judson wanted to take revenge on the “Criminal” but instead ended up drinking it himself. So his own trap basically turned against him. This is called not thinking and having obsession.

 

Ruthless: Work

Task Description: Hello! My name is Alepina. This week which is week 9 literacy is about a story ruthless. This story contains a bit for confident readers. SPOILER: It’s about a man with his wife packing and realising someone has been drinking his alchol. (He’s an alcholic.) He than poisons it and the unthinkable happens when the man dirnks it due to his addiction. Have a look at the story and till the end me and my partner/friend did an interview as me being the author and her being the interviewer. Bye!

Te Whare Tapa Wha Wellbeing Plan

Task Description: Kia Ora! For term 1’s inquiry task we decided to learn, talk and think about our term’s topic. That topic is called “Te Whare Tapa Wha.” This is a create task and an all talk about task. It wasnt just me doing this but also others. The others and I had to rate and explain the 4 walls. Those walls can be known as, Taha Tinana, Taha Wairua, Taha Hinegnaro and Taha Whanau.

Check it out! Byee.

My Master Whakapepeha

Task Description: Hello! This was posted as a free blog so consider this not personal and private. Anyways, this work is just all about me but in my culture. In case you dont understand Tongan you will understand the pictures expect for some certain places. Like my tribe place and that. This was suppose to be presented on tuesday infront of people! Good thing I finished just in time.

Check it out!

Stem Tech Project1

For us intermediates we went to tech. Tech is something you do at a college for maybe skills or developence in the brain. There is 4 different types of classes or teaching. Those four are known as stem, hard materials, textiles and cooking. For me and my team it was stem. We talked about gardens, light and more. For this photo we did light. We had to close all curtains and turn off the light. Each of the 3 teams were given a lightbox. We had to solve it and do some like obstruction course. But of course light.

N.S.A Statistical Investagation

Task Description: Hello everyone! For room 4’s task was about data investagation. There can be another word for data that could add up. That is statistic. We had to add and analyse people’s favourite (based off the topic. For example our’s were what room 4’s favourite sport is.) We had a set of questions to answer and would like for you to check it out! If theres any misread information please let me, Nadi or Sanyadi to know what our mistakes were! Bye.

Alternative Counter Writing

breeze blowing and a sweet smell of mesquite fruit in the air, but I didn’t appreciate it. I kicked a dirt clod. I wanted that jacket so much. It was more than just being a valedictorian and giving a little thank you speech for the jacket on graduation night. It represented eight years of hard work and expectation. I knew I had to be honest with Grandpa; it was my only chance. He saw my shadow and looked up.

 

He waited for me to speak. I cleared my throat nervously and clasped my hands behind my back so he wouldn’t see them shaking. “Grandpa, I have a big favour to ask you,” I said in Spanish, the only language he knew. He still waited silently. I tried again. “Grandpa, this year the principal said the scholarship jacket is not going to be free. It’s going to cost fifteen dollars, and I have to take the money in tomorrow, otherwise it’ll be given to someone else.” The last words came out in an eager rush. Grandpa straightened up tiredly and leaned his chin on the hoe handle. He looked out over the field that was filled with the tiny green bean plants. I waited, desperately hoping he’d say I could have the money.

 

He turned to me and sighed. “Fine. But this is your responsibility even if you don’t get it.” I quickly wiped my tears away as soon as my happy tears came running down my face. He wiped his hands on his pants and shoved his hand into his pockets. I couldn’t feel anything as if I was numb. He gave the $15 to me and I ran inside. 

 

“Grandma! Look.” I showed her the $15 dollar note and she went silent for a bit. She went back to knitting after that. Loud knocking came from out of the door as I leaned forward to see what she was going to say. 

 

“Marta!” It sounded like a mad man. Grandma looked up with a confused expression and told me “ Go check who that is. I hopped towards the door. As I opened the door I could see a tall man with a brownish, grayish hat. “Marta.” He gasped for some air. I knew he was running towards my house. We really didn’t have many cars. Not even the principal. “Marta. It’s going onto being free so you don’t have to worry about the $15. I heard my grandma interrupt and told me “Dile por que.” I knew in english she basically said “Tell him why.” I told him exactly what  my grandma had said in english. He stood there for a bit and sighed. “Joann is not getting it. You are.” “I have $15!” He didn’t want to say anything but just to take it. It’s been a few days.

It was graduation day. One by one prizes are given out until they see who the valedictorian will be. As the principal held out the scholarship jacket my eyes brightened up and beamed with joy. “And the valedictorian for this year goes to…. Marta!” my eyes started tearing up as I got shocked. People clap me on the way onto the stage. I gave out my final speech while holding the jacket. “Thank you so much! Thank you team and school for this special moment to happen!” Everyone started clapping and as I looked onto the side to finally leave.

My eyes caught attention to my grandparents being here. “Nana! Papa!” I ran crying towards them hugging.

Count Backwards By Fives

Task Description: Today I did a free blog about counting backwards in fives! This was a bit entertaining because I had no focus but to listen to my classmates giggles. This was a bit fun but I managed through. This is some ways on how to count back and I used counting back in fives. Hope you enjoy it!

Rounding Rules Poster

Task Description: Hello guys and welcome to rounding numbers. For math we had to learn about statistics. Me and room 4 also had to do a poster about it so others can learn. And so this will be really important information for them. There are quite a few examples and some questions to answer if you would like to. Thank you for taking your time reading this! Have a good day.