The Unexpected Visitor

Click, click, click! The sound of a controller button grew louder each time I got competitive. But the sound of rain from outside was even louder. Each raindrop sounds like tap shoes used on concrete. 

 

I was home alone with no one but my dog Coco. While gaming I could hear a loud knock on the door. “What the.” That sounded like no knock but a bang echoing from an empty, silent room. As I caught a glimpse of Coco barking at the door I yelled out his name. “Coco!” He didn’t stop. He was shaking. His fur was standing up and he backed down. I sensed something was wrong but as soon as the knocking stopped I forgot about it.

 

Within 30 minutes the TV flicked onto the news. “ Hello people of Grindville watching. It is reported that you should stay at home. Lock every single door and windows. There seems to be a heavy hailstorm. Lasting about 6 hours.” The news reporter went on and on. Nothing seemed interesting before stopping at a part where the news reporter says: “Skinwalkers Have been caught. True or not you should still not open the door! I repeat do not open the door!”

This had to be a joke. My parents would tell me all sorts of stories about Grindville being the safest town known to mankind! 

 

Soon after a while I heard a knock louder than the first knock. “Ruby!” I heard a woman. She sounded familiar “Ruby, open the door!” Although I wasn’t brave, I replied.“Coming!”

 

 As I stood in front of the door I got a feeling. Like I’m not supposed to be doing this. 

Just to be sure I peeked through the curtains. A woman. “Mum?” I was confused. She went out with my dad.

 

As soon as I unlocked the door she burst in. “Ruby!” My mum looked down while I was on the floor. “Mum? Where’s dad!?” “He’s still at the restaurant, don’t worry.” “Restaurant?” I was sure my mum said they went to an important family meeting. I didn’t really pay much attention but I was sure. Surprised, I said, “What are you doing back here?” “I came to make sure my daughter was ok.” She replied with a grin. “Sit down, I’ll make tea. And I have something to tell you.” My mum would never make tea if we have to talk about something. Soonly I became suspicious. She went on and on asking about family stuff. Like my birthday. “Hey, mum.” “Yes?” “This doesn’t taste like the usual tea.” “Oh, I have a usual tea order?” I was surprised. My mum would probably know her usual tea even if she had dementia most of the time. 

 

My phone’s ringtone set off. “Wait mum, I have to answer this call.” It was my mum’s phone number. “Hmm.” I picked it up and heard a woman’s voice. My mom’s voice. “Hey Ruby? I’m almost here but we’re stuck in traffic. The hail storm is heavy so we might not be able to make it.”  “Wait. Mum? Is this a prank or something?” “What?” Cars honking made it difficult to hear my mom’s voice. But I was definitely sure that was her. “Mum, I thought you were just talking to me in the lounge?” “No. Are you delusional? I’m not here yet.” As I thought about it I realised. “The news!” I must’ve let in a skinwalker. “Ruby?” That was the only thing I heard before dropping the phone and picking up my softball bat. As I slowly encountered the living room with a fast beating heart, no one was there. 

 

Distance Between Planets Poster

Hello! Today for inquiry/math we did a create task! It was about distance between our 8 planets! Using measurments and researching room 4 has made up posters. Starting from the beginning all the way to the furthest. For example since Mercury is the first near the sun it is because its the closest. And Neptune is the farthest.

Free Verse Poem

 Quick, quick,

Fastly, fastly. 

My mind could be everywhere 

The fear of being late came.

So did the fear of getting in trouble. 

But I also felt..

To stop overthinking. 

 

My face could show expressions as if my stomach dropped.

 

“Groups of 3” Is what I heard.

Every group was full until I heard “ Join us!”

 

30 minutes was not enough time.

Confused on what an egg drop challenge is.

I just accepted. 

 

Grabbing our material’s wasn’t so easy.

Since some people grabbed what we needed. 

 

Cotton pads flew everywhere from where I could see.

Glue on the table’s it felt so sticky. 

Straw’s everywhere I crushed them. 

Crowd’s erupted once the timer ended. 

 

We had to wear funny hats. 

Mine was pom, poms. Some fur fell on my mouth

I could taste it. 

 

I ran outside, took my hat off and rushed to the bathroom. 

I came back and,

 

So our design was not so wonderful.

But at least we had a house for our egg.

 

Peniake. Peniake was the name for the egg.

 

Everyone walked out but I waited to be at the back. 

One by one some egg’s would drop, some would not.

 

The 1st Round survived.

The 2nd Round surely survived. 

 

But screaming wasn’t humble. 

Warning team’s she would take point’s off. She did.

 

Once the last team came upon. The house was too big with not enough material’s inside. They thought it would go through. 

 

“Crack!” The smell of egg’s caught my attention as I tried to go back inside. 

 

That’s when I saw them being humble. Staring at me and nodding. 

 

That’s when I realized.

 

Being a leader doesn’t mean shouting and placing people.

It’s about helping, bravery, and gentleness with others.

 

That’s the rotation for Room 4. 

 

“Teamwork makes the dreamwork.”

 

Describe It!

With eyes wide open, I stared at the starry night sky. The aurora shone vividly, crystal clear against the dark canvas above. The feeling of the snow beneath me was calming  until I looked down the mountain. Suddenly, the calm shifted, and my heart began to beat faster than usual. I could hear myself speaking, my voice carried by the ever-moving air. The bright yellow tent, once vibrant, was slowly fading in color as it sank into the snow. Smelling wasn’t easy either; there was nothing but the crisp, cold scent of the snow. The cold air tasted sharp and metallic on my tongue, like licking frozen iron. I felt the icy wind travel down my throat as my eyes closed.

(By the help of my big brother I would like to give some credits for him teaching me some new detailed words I could use!)

 

 

Semicolons

What is a Semicolon (;)?

A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses that are closely related in meaning. It can also be used to separate items in a list when the items contain commas.

Examples:

  1. I wanted to stay up late; however, I was too tired.
  2. We visited Paris, France; Rome, Italy; and Madrid, Spain.

 

Why should I care?

Semicolons help your writing flow and add sophistication to your work. More importantly, you get marks for using them! Marks are available for using a wide range of punctuation accurately, including semi-colons.

Part 1: Combine the Sentences Using a Semicolon

Rewrite the following sentence pairs as one sentence using a semicolon.

  1. The sun was setting; the sky turned a brilliant shade of orange.
  2. I have a big test tomorrow; I can’t go out tonight.
  3. My dog loves to run outside; he hates getting his paws wet.
  4. We went to the park; it started to rain.
  5. I enjoy reading books; my sister prefers watching movies.

Part 2: Add Semicolons

Add the missing semicolons into the following sentences.

  1. Dan was in a filthy mood; it was Monday morning and the coffee machine was out of order.
  2. The video game was ludicrously expensive; nevertheless, I bought it anyway.
  3. I made some bad decisions yesterday; I shouldn’t have had that seventh cream egg.
  4. Zara came into school on crutches; an owl had knocked her off her skateboard again.
  5. We haven’t won the league since 1927; despite this, I still buy a season ticket every year.
  6. Katie’s dad got up on stage and sang karaoke; she was absolutely mortified.
  7. South Sudan is the newest country in the world; it gained independence in 2011.
  8. Dylan didn’t get past the first audition; they said he had a voice like a wounded moose.
  9. On my trip to Europe, I visited Vienna, Austria; Prague, Czech; Republic Berlin, Germany; and Copenhagen, Denmark.
  10. You’ll need to pack warm clothes, drinks, and snacks for the hike; books, headphones, and games for the flight; and pyjamas, toiletries, and chargers for the hotel.

Part 3: Create Your Own Sentences

Write three original sentences using semicolons correctly.

  1. My dog was eating bones; he didn’t know it has a sharp end.
  2. The  burger flipped; ketchup splattered on me
  3. I played softball with my brother; he doesn’t know how to bat

Compulsory Challenge: Find a sentence in a book or article that correctly uses a semicolon. Write it down and explain why the semicolon is used.

I drove to a restaurant to meet my friends; they weren’t there. I was quite upset, questioning myself, ‘Why would they do this? It’s my birthday.’ As I started leaving, my friends popped out from the left and right, yelling, ‘Happy Birthday!

It’s used to make stories more knowledgeable and not complicated. It should also join two exact sentences that are related. Like close and the same. Not exactly sometimes.

Ruthless: Response To Text

Instructions:

  • Read through this text. 
  • Using the highlighter tool, remove any information that is NOT important in identifying the author’s message by highlighting it in black.
  • Make sure you look at all the information.
  • Answer the questions below the text

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Ruthless – By William DeMille 1945

Outside, the woods lay basking in clear October sunlight; trees a riot of color, air full of Autumn’s tang  and the sharp, exciting smell of moist, leaf- covered earth. Inside, a man smiled grimly as he turned from the  bathroom cabinet, entered the expensively primitive  living room of his mountain camp, and crossed to a  closet set in the pine wall. It was his special closet, with a spring lock and in it he kept guns, ammunition, fishing-rods, tackle2 and liquor. Not even his wife was allowed to have a key, for Judson Webb loved his personal possessions and felt a sense of deep outrage if they were touched by any hand but his own. The closet door stood open; he had been packing his things away for the Winter, and in a few minutes would be driving back to civilization.

As he looked at the shelf on which the liquor stood his smile was not attractive. All the bottles were unopened except one quart of Bourbon which was placed invitingly in front, a whiskey glass by its side. This bottle was less than half full. As he took it from the shelf his wife spoke from the adjoining bedroom:

“I’m all packed, Judson,” she said. “Hasn’t Alec come to turn the water off and get the keys?”
Alec lived about a mile down the road and acted as a caretaker for the city folks when they were away.

“He’s down at the lake taking the boats out of water. Said he’d be back in half an hour.”
But she paused in surprise as she saw the bottle in her husband’s hand.
“Judson!” she exclaimed, “you’re not taking a drink at ten o’clock in the morning?”

“You wrong me, my dear,” he chuckled, “I’m not taking anything out of this bottle: I am merely putting a little kick into it.

His closed hand opened and he put upon the table two tiny white pellets3 as he started to uncork the whiskey. Her eyes narrowed as she watched him. She had learned to dread that tone of his voice; it was the tone he used when he was planning to “put something over”4 in a business deal.

“Whoever broke into my closet last Winter and stole my liquor will probably try it again once we are out of here,” he went on, “only this time he’ll wish he hadn’t.”

She caught her breath at the cruel vindictiveness of his manner as one by one he dropped the tablets into the bottle and held it up to watch them dissolve.

“What are they?” she asked, “something to make him sick?”

“And how!” He seemed fascinated as he saw the genial Bourbon change into a lethal dose: “At least no one has found an antidote:5 once it’s down its curtains.”6 He corked his bottled vengeance and set it back on the shelf alongside the little whiskey glass.

 “Everything nice and handy,” he remarked approvingly. “Now, Mr. Thief, when you break in, drink hearty; I won’t begrudge  you this one.”

The woman’s face was pale. “Don’t do it, Judson,” she gasped. “It’s horrible — it’s murder.”

“The law doesn’t call it murder if I shoot a thief who is entering my house by force,” he said harshly. “Also, the use of rat poison is quite legal. The only way any rat can get into this closet is to break in. What happens then is his affair, not mine.”

“Don’t do it, Judson,” she begged. “The law doesn’t punish burglary by death; so what right have you -”

“When it comes to protecting my property I make my own laws.” His deep voice suggested a big dog growling at threatened loss of a bone.

“But all they did was to steal a little liquor,” she pleaded. “Probably some boys off on a lark.8 They didn’t do any real damage.”

“That’s not the point,” he said. “If a man holds me up and robs me of five dollars it makes me just as sore as if he took a hundred. A thief’s a thief.”

She made one last effort. “We won’t be here till next spring. I can’t bear to think of that deathtrap waiting there all the time. Suppose something happens to us — and no one knows — ”

He chuckled once more at her words. “We’ll take a chance on that,” he said. “I’ve made my pile9 by taking chances. If I should die, you can do as you please. The stuff will be yours.”

It was useless to argue, she knew. He had always been ruthless in business and whenever anything crossed him. Things had to be done his way. She turned toward the outer door with a sigh of defeat. “I’ll walk down the road and say goodbye at the farmhouse,” she said quietly. “You can pick me up there.” She had made up her mind to tell Alec’s wife. Someone had to know.

“Okay, my dear,” he smiled genially, “and don’t worry about your poor, abused little burglar. No one is going to get hurt who hasn’t got it coming to him.”

As she went down the path he started to close the closet door; then paused as he remembered his hunting boots drying outside on the porch. They belonged in the closet, so leaving the door open he went to fetch them from the heavy, rustic table on which they stood, along with his bag and top coat.

Alec was coming up from the lake and waved to him from a distance. A chipmunk, hearing Judson’s heavy tread, abandoned the acorn he was about to add to his store within the cabin wall and disappeared, like an electric bulb burning out. Judson, reaching for his boots, stepped fairly upon the acorn, his foot slid from under him and his head struck the massive table as he fell.

Several minutes later he began to regain his senses. Alec’s strong arm was supporting his head as he lay on the porch and a kindly voice was saying: “’Twarn’t  much of a fall, Mr. Webb. You aren’t cut none; jest knocked out for a minute. Here, take this; it’ll pull you together.”

A small whiskey glass was pressed to his lips. Dazed and half-conscious, he drank.

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Question 1 – What is the text mainly about? Make sure you answer using full sentences.

 

The text is mainly about this man that loves alcohol and wont quit at all. His obsession soon goes dangerous. And it backfires. 

 

Question 2 – How does this text make you feel or react? 

 

The text makes me feel a bit uncomfortable but more and mostly disgusted. Because the man has a great obsession with his belongings, mostly about alcohol. He loves it way more than his own family and love.

 

Question 3 – Using the information above,  what do you think is the author’s MAIN message and why do you think this? 

 

Or is some sort of way: Being greedy and cruel will come back at you.

Why? Because Judson wanted to take revenge on the “Criminal” but instead ended up drinking it himself. So his own trap basically turned against him. This is called not thinking and having obsession.

 

Ruthless: Work

Task Description: Hello! My name is Alepina. This week which is week 9 literacy is about a story ruthless. This story contains a bit for confident readers. SPOILER: It’s about a man with his wife packing and realising someone has been drinking his alchol. (He’s an alcholic.) He than poisons it and the unthinkable happens when the man dirnks it due to his addiction. Have a look at the story and till the end me and my partner/friend did an interview as me being the author and her being the interviewer. Bye!

Te Whare Tapa Wha Wellbeing Plan

Task Description: Kia Ora! For term 1’s inquiry task we decided to learn, talk and think about our term’s topic. That topic is called “Te Whare Tapa Wha.” This is a create task and an all talk about task. It wasnt just me doing this but also others. The others and I had to rate and explain the 4 walls. Those walls can be known as, Taha Tinana, Taha Wairua, Taha Hinegnaro and Taha Whanau.

Check it out! Byee.